Doe · awareness doors · one ad per stage

Seedance swap on donor footage, product-only reference, a Black woman recast by words, Seedance voices; the hook sticker, the before/after pair, the product cutout and the house captions burned by us after the take. Redub pass for the mispronounced words still to run (esthetician, glycolic, melanin, bergamot, insecure).

Door A · PROBLEM AWARE

Valley: it is just my skin, I was born with it

hook: Brooke Thompson advertorial; body: donor 09 (celinesfavoritefinds), the same-product swap that cleared cash

85 s · the before/after lands on lighter at 7.26s · verdict: 4 fatal, 54 major, 33 minor (read it)

  • 0.1s fatal editing: the word "Three" (0.00-0.22 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +11.0 dB inside it
  • 18.2s fatal editing: the word "because" (17.94-18.28 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +22.5 dB inside it
  • 84.1s fatal editing: the word "especially" (83.86-84.26 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +17.9 dB inside it
  • 45.2s fatal continuity: the shot from 45.2s to 46.73s is dressed differently from the rest of the ad: torso colour correlation 0.524 against the other shots, measured over 14 frames. The donor's own least consistent shot measures 0.639 and the
  • 38.3s major speech: SHE SAYS "menahin" WHERE THE SCRIPT SAYS "melanin". A viewer hears the wrong line; fix by redubbing that line in her own cloned voice (a-mispronounced-brand-is-redubbed-not-regenerated)
  • 47.6s major speech: SHE SAYS "dough" WHERE THE SCRIPT SAYS "doe". A viewer hears the wrong line; fix by redubbing that line in her own cloned voice (a-mispronounced-brand-is-redubbed-not-regenerated)
  • 68.0s major deadair: DEAD AIR: she stops talking for 0.72 s after "day." (68.00-68.72 s) while the picture keeps running; the picture cuts at 68.73 s inside the gap. A viewer sees her move with nothing said; trim the tail or fill the line
  • 80.6s major deadair: DEAD AIR: she stops talking for 0.86 s after "desert." (80.56-81.42 s) while the picture keeps running; the picture cuts at 81.30 s inside the gap. A viewer sees her move with nothing said; trim the tail or fill the line
  • 14.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The armpit comparison overlay at the top of the screen vanishes instantly with no fade, animation or transition - it simply stops existing in the frame with no warning.
  • 14.9s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Hard unmotivated jump cut: the entire background changes instantly. The ceiling fan present for the first 5 seconds vanishes completely, replaced by a blank wall. Camera framing also shif
  • 30.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Jarring hard cut opens the clip: the prior shot cut off mid-speech, this shot begins with no transition, the woman's position and framing jump abruptly with zero continuity. Audio cuts cl
  • 30.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Abrupt unmotivated cut: the shot changes instantly with no transition, background, framing, and held object all change discontinuously mid-speech flow. The product appears in her hand out
  • 45.2s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Hard cut where the woman's clothing instantly changes from white tank top to cream halter top, a necklace appears out of nowhere, and new background items appear with zero transition. The
  • 50.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The woman's entire raised left arm disappears instantly between frames with no motion or transition; one frame it is held overhead, the next it is repositioned down gesturing normally
  • 66.6s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): With no cut or movement explaining it, the woman's tank top shoulder strap instantly changes colour and material from solid white to pale green textured fabric
  • 7.4s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The armpit overlay clip pops in abruptly with no fade or transition, then just as abruptly disappears at 9.8s
  • 23.5s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "if" (23.44-23.66 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 30.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Lighting and skin tone change abruptly across the cut without cause; the woman's skin colour and scene lighting are inconsistent between the two shots.
  • 46.7s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "double" (46.64-46.84 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 56.2s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "tone" (56.14-56.36 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 66.5s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "and" (66.44-66.64 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 66.9s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "bergamot" (66.64-66.98 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 76.1s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "gonna" (76.00-76.10 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 40.7s major action: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The woman's eyes jump instantly and unnaturally upwards off-camera with no smooth movement, in a motion impossible for a real human.
  • 46.0s major action: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The woman pretends to apply deodorant but never makes actual contact between the deodorant stick and her armpit skin; she only waves the object nearby with no real rubbing motion.
  • 75.7s major action: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Deodorant cap detaches unnaturally: it pops free without matching twisting hand motion, no physical resistance is shown.
  • 33.1s major physics: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Despite rubbing the solid deodorant stick repeatedly directly onto her forearm skin, absolutely no product residue, mark, or transfer appears on the skin at all. The stick also wobbles un
  • 56.8s major physics: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Ceiling fan blades teleport position abruptly: the fan blade alignment jumps instantly between frames instead of rotating smoothly
  • 6.6s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): When the woman first raises her hand to gesture, the visible fingers are distorted, blurry, incorrectly shaped and do not look like real human fingers
  • 30.1s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The right hand holding the product has broken anatomy: there are extra, misformed fingers, distorted digit shapes, and inconsistent unnatural nail positions on the visible hand.
  • 33.0s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The curled left hand at the woman's wrist has malformed, fused, distorted fingers that do not match human anatomy; digits are merged incorrectly and shaped unnaturally.
  • 61.8s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The woman's left gesturing hand has distorted extra merged fingers that do not match human anatomy
  • 74.3s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Both hands holding the deodorant have distorted, merged and extra visible fingers while twisting the cap; digits do not look human.
  • 10.9s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The woman's hand appears unnaturally as it enters frame: it pops into view without smooth motion, and the visible fingers are distorted, blurry, and do not match normal human hand anatomy
  • 15.5s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): As the woman gestures, her moving hands have malformed, unstable fingers: individual fingers appear and disappear between frames, shape warps unnaturally, and edges stay incorrectly blurr
  • 20.7s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): When the woman gestures, her hands appear unnaturally distorted: fingers are blurred, count is wrong, and the hands warp unnaturally as they move at the bottom of the frame.
  • 38.0s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Nails on the woman's gesturing left hand are unnaturally warped, misshapen, overly elongated with wrong proportions unlike real human nails.
  • 47.8s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Unnatural rigid horizontal distorted lines appear frozen across the woman's forehead; they do not move or deform correctly with her facial expressions.
  • 48.8s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The fingers on the hand holding the deodorant are malformed: nail shapes are broken, edges are distorted, and finger proportions are wrong.
  • 51.8s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Left hand fingernails repeatedly change length, design and shape between consecutive frames; white tip edges, black line details and nail length shift without cause
  • 64.5s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The length and shape of the woman's fingernails on her holding hand change unnaturally between consecutive frames
  • 69.2s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The woman's left hand raised above her head has merged, incorrectly counted fingers
  • 70.9s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Right hand applying deodorant has warped fingers: the gold ring appears to incorrectly float across multiple fingers.
  • 82.4s major anatomy: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The left index finger pointing at the product has distorted, unnatural anatomy and a misshapen nail
  • 11.3s major overlay: BODY OVERLAY (before_after) IS NOT HERS: no source_frame inside this ad names the presenter frame it was made from. Fix: make the pair from a frame of this ad and name it in the plan
  • 81.7s major other: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The blue deodorant cap in the woman's left hand is incorrectly fused/clipping through her finger, it does not appear to be properly held as a separate object
  • 0.0s major overlay: STICKER A-aha.png: too large: 0.91 of the width and 0.10 of the height (caps 0.85 and 0.32, swipe median width 54%); outside the platform safe zone on the top (y 0.07 < 0.15, under the TikTok and Shorts header), left (x
  • 0.1s major audio-seam: the track steps +11.0 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 7.3s major overlay: OVERLAY now-A.png: outside the platform safe zone on the top (y 0.03 < 0.15, under the TikTok and Shorts header). Fix: move or resize it in the plan and re-render
  • 7.7s major other: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The arm/armpit in the overlay has unnaturally smoothed skin, a warped edge where the arm meets the tank top, and looks obviously AI generated
  • 11.3s major overlay: OVERLAY pair-A.png: outside the platform safe zone on the top (y 0.03 < 0.15, under the TikTok and Shorts header). Fix: move or resize it in the plan and re-render
  • 15.0s major audio-seam: SEAM CLICK at the cut at 15.033s: click at 15.0406s, click at 15.0407s, discontinuity at 15.0407s (jump 0.4301). Fix: a 10 ms crossfade across the join
  • 18.2s major audio-seam: the track steps +22.5 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 54.0s major audio-seam: the track steps +16.8 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 60.3s major audio-seam: the track steps +9.1 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 60.3s major audio-seam: SEAM CLICK at the cut at 60.267s: click at 60.2985s, click at 60.2986s, click at 60.2987s. Fix: a 10 ms crossfade across the join
  • 83.7s major audio-seam: the track steps -22.0 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 84.1s major audio-seam: the track steps +17.9 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
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Door B · PROBLEM AWARE

Valley: it is normal, stop selling me a fix

hook: LivinWild advertorial A8; body: LivinWild + Miravelle beats on donor 03 footage

70 s · the before/after lands on mine at 4.82s · verdict: 10 fatal, 44 major, 21 minor (read it)

  • 5.8s fatal editing: the word "especially" (5.54-5.96 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +13.9 dB inside it
  • 11.0s fatal editing: the word "to..." (10.94-11.30 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps -11.9 dB inside it
  • 11.3s fatal editing: the word "to..." (10.94-11.30 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +11.5 dB inside it
  • 25.5s fatal editing: the word "exactly..." (25.22-25.92 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +9.3 dB inside it
  • 45.6s fatal editing: the word "So" (45.58-45.72 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +13.8 dB inside it
  • 47.6s fatal editing: the word "That" (47.52-47.66 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +14.8 dB inside it
  • 48.1s fatal identity: the face in the shot from 48.13s to 49.4s does not match the rest of the ad: SFace cosine 0.432 against the other shots (every labelled control sits above 0.82)
  • 56.0s fatal editing: the word "because" (55.80-56.14 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +26.6 dB inside it
  • 60.3s fatal editing: the word "I" (60.18-60.36 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +14.4 dB inside it
  • 65.7s fatal editing: the word "I'll" (65.64-65.82 s) is cut in half: the picture changes AND the track steps +28.4 dB inside it
  • 0.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Clip starts abruptly mid-speech and mid-gesture, no opening lead-in, hands are cut off at the very first frame
  • 0.2s major text: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Text overlay pops in instantly with zero fade/transition, appears jarringly out of nowhere at the top of frame
  • 3.2s major text: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Opening top text vanishes abruptly with no transition, instantly disappears mid-sentence
  • 3.4s major text: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): New text is placed incorrectly low, overlapping directly over the speaker's nose and mouth instead of a clean screen position
  • 5.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Underarm comparison thumbnail images pop in abruptly floating at top left, appear completely unprompted with no gesture, animation or context leading to them
  • 7.2s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): The floating underarm images vanish instantly for no reason, mid-speech with no trigger action
  • 21.0s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Abrupt untransitioned jump cut: camera framing, woman's head position, and background wall lighting shift instantly between shots with no smooth cut
  • 25.8s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Extremely jarring hard cut: entire background room changes, lighting darkens drastically, woman's hair style and tank top fit shift instantly with zero transition
  • 31.1s major lipsync: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Speaker's mouth stops moving entirely while spoken audio continues playing over the still face
  • 40.8s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Extremely abrupt hard cut: background wall, hair pose, and hand position all jump instantly with no transition or natural movement. Audio also cuts harshly here.
  • 40.9s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Harsh unmotivated hard cut: mid-smile the shot jumps instantly to a completely different framing holding a product with no transition
  • 49.7s major physics: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Impossible physics: the woman's fingertips clip directly through the solid plastic deodorant bottle while she twists the cap, with solid objects intersecting.
  • 53.4s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Extremely obvious untransitioned hard cut: background wall colour, lighting, camera framing, and the woman's entire upper body position all jump instantly between shots with no fade or cu
  • 60.1s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Deodorant cap vanishes instantly between frames. No hand movement to remove it exists, the cap disappears entirely in one cut. This is immediately obvious.
  • 0.0s major identity: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Unnaturally uniform glossy plastic-like shine across chest and neck, this is not real human skin/sweat, it is characteristic of bad AI generated skin rendering
  • 3.0s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "magically" (2.62-3.12 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 4.2s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Another jump cut: hair curls shift position, head angle snaps, and skin lighting changes unnaturally between adjacent frames
  • 5.8s major audio-seam: the track steps +13.9 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 11.0s major audio-seam: the track steps -11.9 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 11.3s major audio-seam: the track steps +11.5 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 22.0s major action: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Woman's right hand pops into the bottom edge of the frame abruptly with no natural leading motion
  • 25.5s major audio-seam: the track steps +9.3 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 25.9s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "exactly..." (25.22-25.92 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 29.4s major action: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Hand teleport glitch: the woman's gesturing hand shifts position unnaturally across one frame with no continuous movement
  • 40.9s major audio-seam: the track steps +18.5 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 41.0s major lipsync: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Broken lip sync immediately after the cut: the woman's mouth is already mid-speech shape at the very start of this shot, and does not align with the start of the spoken line.
  • 43.4s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Continuity error: the blue deodorant stick completely vanishes then reappears in the woman's hand between cuts, with no movement showing her picking it back up.
  • 45.6s major audio-seam: the track steps +13.8 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 47.6s major audio-seam: the track steps +14.8 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 47.7s major other: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Printed text on the deodorant bottle warps unnaturally: letters distort, stretch and mis-shape incorrectly as the object is moved, this is a clear AI rendering artifact.
  • 48.1s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "led" (47.88-48.18 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 49.4s major audio-seam: the track steps +31.3 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 50.6s major physics: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Unnaturally fast, non-human hand motion: her fingers twist the cap far quicker and smoother than a real person can move
  • 51.4s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Single frame jump error: the deodorant cap vanishes completely for 1 frame mid-pull gesture, then reappears
  • 55.3s major lipsync: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Lip sync failure: the spoken word 'niacinamide' does not match her mouth shapes at all. Her lips are not forming the correct syllables for this word
  • 56.0s major audio-seam: the track steps +26.6 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 57.9s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "perfect" (57.76-58.14 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 60.3s major audio-seam: the track steps +14.4 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 61.6s major text: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): On-screen caption changes early. New text appears while the speaker is still actively saying the prior line of dialogue.
  • 61.7s major editing: the picture changes inside the spoken word "becoming" (61.48-61.82 s). The track runs on through it, so the line is whole and the EDIT lands mid-word, which reads as clumsy rather than broken.
  • 62.5s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Right hand motion skips frames. The hand teleports half-way up to her head, with all intermediate movement frames missing.
  • 65.7s major audio-seam: the track steps +28.4 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
  • 65.8s major editing: SWEEP (confirmed on the frames): Right arm jumps instantly into the downward pointing pose. No smooth motion exists to move the hand into this position, it appears there out of nowhere.
  • 67.2s major audio-seam: the track steps -8.5 dB at this cut with speech running on both sides of it, which is heard as a jump in level
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Door C · SOLUTION AWARE

Valley: I tried everything and stronger made it worse

hook: Smooche brow ad (family B); aha: Miravelle esthetician; body: donor 12 (vanilla_swirlxx) rant

94 s · the before/after lands on everything at 4.34s · verdict: 0 fatal, 0 major, 7 minor (read it)

  • no fatal or major finding
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