Doe — the third hand is gone

Script 6's chunk 2 was the one piece of either ad still running on the old references, which is why a hand reached in from the right at 19 seconds. It was regenerated and the ad rejoined.

Both ads as they stand

Script 6 — celines

37.6 seconds · all three chunks now regenerated

the third hand is gone
  • fixed 19–20s the hand that came in from the right to point at her underarm. She now has two arms, both hers, through the whole beat
  • improved 4s the pale yellow item dropped from fatal to major
  • 23s arguable fatal — the tool says the cap teleports into her hand. The frames show both hands on the product between 23.0 and 23.5s, which is the uncapping it wanted to see
  • 13s real and small — the label renders 75g / 2.5oz where our packshot reads 75g / 2.65oz. Legible on screen
  • 12–21s major — the brand spoken as "one", "done", "doesn't"

Script 2 — natiscart

56.0 seconds · unchanged since you approved it

good to go
  • Runs end to end with the scarcity close attached.
  • Label print drifts at some moments; the brand is spoken as "do" at 10.7s.

Chunk 2, before and after

The same fifteen seconds. Watch the right edge at about four seconds in.

Before

15.1 seconds · old references

three arms
  • At 3.4 to 4.4s a hand with long pale nails enters from the right and points at her raised underarm.

After

15.0 seconds · references cropped from the rebuilt chunks either side

two arms, both hers
  • She raises one arm and points at her underarm with the stick in her own other hand.
  • The old prompt forbade a second woman and another face, and a disembodied hand is neither. This one describes what fills that space instead: the car door, the window glass, daylight, plain upholstery.

The three new ads

DonorLengthCaptionsCastCost
04 storie7777748.0s, 7 cuts1 line at the top of frameHer and her husband, who sniffs her armpit in the hook$3.60
01 weeniefindsit55.4s, 25 cuts1 line at the bottom of frameOne woman$4.13
08 isspano13.8s, 4 cuts26 lines across the middle, left on and re-letteredOne woman$0.98

None of the three needs the caption GPU. All five donors already carry a full beat map on disk: every beat with its seconds, who is on screen, the camera, the actions and the on-screen text.

Spend: $7.57 of generation so far tonight, $0.25 of rented GPU, about $0.10 of QA. Balance is roughly $49.

QA verdicts: Script 6 · Script 2